You may have the connections correct, but please double check. The TW-SR10 already has 2.4G/900M redundancy as it uses both frequencies. If you want telemetry on 2.4G then this should be your primary receiver with the servos connected to it. I think you will still have some telemetry sent over the 900M link. The R9-MM is then the secondary receiver.
Use the SBUS OUT of the R9-MM (not the SPort). Disable telemetry on this receiver.
Configure port 1 of the TW-SR10 to be SBUS IN.
Connect the SBUS OUT of the R9-MM to the SBUS in of the TW-SR10.
Test to see if servos continue to work when the the external module is powered off. Note that an easy way to test is to just change the RxNum being used by the external module, quick and easy to disable/enable the TW-SR10 receiver.
If you are wanting to use the R9-MM as the primary receiver, I suggest configuring as above first an check that all works.
I've done some testing with two, ACCESS receivers, currently in slots 1 and 3 of the Tx. Initially receiver 1 sends telemetry and polls the SPort. receiver 3 does neither. If I power receiver 1 off, then after a delay of 0.84 seconds, receiver 3 starts sending telemetry and polling the SPort. Restoring power to receiver 1 still leaves receiver 3 sending telemetry and polling the SPort.
If I then power receiver 3 off, then receiver 1 starts sending telemetry and polling the SPort, again after a delay of 0.84 seconds.
It seems the receiver not sending telemetry is listening to the one that is sending and times out if nothing is sent for 0.84 seconds, thus causing it to start sending telemetry.
Mike